minor edits

diff --git a/blog/posts/2009/04/howto:_uploading_to_people.d.o_using_dput.mdwn b/blog/posts/2009/04/howto:_uploading_to_people.d.o_using_dput.mdwn
index fb02fa2..9b65d0e 100644 (file)
--- a/blog/posts/2009/04/howto:_uploading_to_people.d.o_using_dput.mdwn
+++ b/blog/posts/2009/04/howto:_uploading_to_people.d.o_using_dput.mdwn
@@ -110,17 +110,20 @@ You have a couple of ways to sign the release file automatically:
           release_signscript = ~/bin/sign-release.sh
 
 2. <small>(/me likes this)</small> use some script to sign the Release
-  file remotely and send the resulting deatched sig back to people.d.o
-  just after the mini-dinstall pulse. To achieve that, the most
-  elegant way would be to fix debsign wishlist
+  file remotely and send the resulting deatched signature back to
+  people.d.o just after the mini-dinstall pulse; that way you can sign
+  with your own private key, which will be reasonably felt as more
+  trustworthy, being part of the Debian keyring.
+  
+  To achieve that, the most elegant way would be to fix debsign
+  wishlist
   [#465240](http://bugs.debian.org/cgi-bin/bugreport.cgi?bug=465240)
   (volunteers? :-) ). As I'm lazy, I'm using my own [[sign-remote]]
   script, which is a bit more generic.
   
-  Unfortunately, to hook into dput post upload hook mechanism, you
-  need an indirection script because I failed to make dput like
-  ";"-separated shell commands. All in all, here is my actual
-  `~/.dput.cf` stanza:
+  Unfortunately, to hook into dput post upload mechanism, you need an
+  indirection script because I failed to make dput like ";"-separated
+  shell commands. All in all, here is my actual `~/.dput.cf` stanza:
 
           [people.debian.org]
           fqdn = people.debian.org
@@ -129,6 +132,9 @@ You have a couple of ways to sign the release file automatically:
           incoming = /home/zack/public_html/debian/mini-dinstall/incoming
           post_upload_command = /home/zack/bin/dinstall-people.d.o
 
-  with [[dinstall-people.d.o]] being rather trivial.
+  with [[dinstall-people.d.o]] being rather trivial: it first invokes
+  mini-dinstall remotely and then sign with [[sign-remote]].
+
+Enjoy!
 
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