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diff --git a/blog/posts/2009/03/zack_for_DPL.mdwn b/blog/posts/2009/03/zack_for_DPL.mdwn
index 86fac1f..6fdaf6e 100644 (file)
--- a/blog/posts/2009/03/zack_for_DPL.mdwn
+++ b/blog/posts/2009/03/zack_for_DPL.mdwn
@@ -11,36 +11,36 @@ Am I out of my mind?
 Possibly :-)
 
 It started as a joke at last DebConf, with my (naked or dressed ...)
-room mates spreading that rumor, which has quickly involved other
-friends. Then the idea grows into me ... and now here I am. (IOW: I'm
-pretending I'm not entirely guilty of inflicting another platform to
-be read.)
+room mates spreading that rumor. Then the idea grows into me ... and
+now here I am. (IOW: I'm pretending I'm not entirely guilty of
+inflicting another platform to be read.)
 
 Apparently we are just two candidates: me and the "ticket"
 [Steve](http://blog.einval.com/)-[Luk](http://zomers.be/~luk/blog/index.html).
 
 For the moment I've to spare [[a page|hacking/debian/dpl-2009]] where
-I will collect "live" material about the election, and a couple of
-feelings:
-
-* Sending the nomination mail is embarrassing: we are used to do only
-  technical stuff in Debian, declaring our will of taking care for a
-  while of our non-technical issues ain't easy.
-
-* Preparing a platform is an intriguing experience: whining about our
-  problems is a thing, trying to dilute them in an organized list and
-  think about long term solutions is a totally different one.  Try
-  writing your "platform" even if you are not candidate, even if there
-  are no DPL elections around (as
+I will collect material about the election, and a couple of feelings:
+
+* Sending the [nomination
+  mail](http://lists.debian.org/debian-vote/2009/03/msg00004.html) is
+  embarrassing: we are used to do only technical stuff in Debian,
+  declaring our will of taking care for a while of our non-technical
+  issues ain't easy.
+
+* Preparing a platform is an intriguing experience. Whining about our
+  problems is a thing. Trying to dilute them in an organized list, and
+  think about long term solutions is a totally different one.  I
+  suggest to try writing your own "platform" even if you are not
+  candidate, and even when there are no DPL elections around (as
   [Joey](http://kitenet.net/~joey/blog/) and
   [HE](http://gonzo.dicp.de/~he/blog/) did a while ago, IIRC, in the
   form of blog posts). It can be a rewarding exercise.
 
-My platform has been submitted to the secretary, and is [[now
-available|hacking/debian/dpl-2009/platform.html]].
+Version 1.0 of my platform has been submitted to the secretary, and is
+now [[available from my homepage|hacking/debian/dpl-2009/platform.html]].
 
 If you have questions, for me or the other candidates, just post them
 on [`-vote`](http://lists.debian.org/debian-vote/): campaigning has
-just started and will be fun, I hope!
+just started, I'm confident it will be fun!
 
 [[!tag lang/english planet/debian debian dpl]]

diff --git a/hacking/debian/dpl-2009.mdwn b/hacking/debian/dpl-2009.mdwn
index 89a799c..35095fc 100644 (file)
--- a/hacking/debian/dpl-2009.mdwn
+++ b/hacking/debian/dpl-2009.mdwn
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ in the [yearly elections](http://www.debian.org/vote/2009/vote_001).
 
 This page collects information about my candidacy.
 
-* my [nomination mail](http://lists.debian.org/debian-vote/2009/03/msg00004.html)
+* [nomination mail](http://lists.debian.org/debian-vote/2009/03/msg00004.html)
 * my [[DPL platform|platform.html]]:
   [[`.html`|platform.html]],
   [[`.pdf`|platform.pdf]],